Peer Reviews
"I would suggest that the opening include more context of what is going on. I understood that someone died and someone else was a suspect, but I did not have any inclination of who the suspect was or what their motive might have been. I felt that there was some missing pieces that could have been added to fill in the blanks." "The sound quality was bad, which made it very hard to hear what the actors were saying. This isn't really something that can be changed. A suggestion might be to voiceover what the actors were already saying-specifically during Tessa's phone call on the beach to 911. I would also try to include the title of your movie at some point during the opening, whether it's at the end, beginning, or middle-or at least some credits." "Tessa should go up to the victim before calling about a dead body. If this video was filmed on a phone camera, putting a sock on the part where audio is picked up should help reduce wind noise....
